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Like A Wolf, A Predator

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Hey guys! Sorry for the lack of activity I had an assignment streak and had pretty much no time on my laptop. Anyway! The holidays started today so I drew a little something to show I am not dead! Took me almost over 5 hours all up. I did this in sai.

Also listen to this song - [link]

Critiques are welcome!
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

This is my 2nd time doing a critique, so please bare with me! I'm using my other acc for this (main-valwolf) because my main doesn't work haha, so here we go! ; v ;

First of I love the pose and whole idea of this piece. The background is very relaxing to my eyes, and I love how it's just the wolf and nothing else. Beautiful!~

Umm, a tip would be first off - if you could put the opacity lower on the moon. Since it's sunrise/sunset it's not supposed to be so solid. Get what I mean? xD I suck at explaining gosh looool.

Second is the wolf, maybe you could work on the shading a little - and practice anatomy! Remember theres ALWAYS room for improvement! ^^

His expression is blank, since he's running maybe he could have a happy / angry expression since that would've explained the piece a little better! <3

Next is the limbs, his paws are very very well-done! But the wrist joint is a bit far up, maybe you could lower it a little.

The last thing is maybe add some more detail to the background and the wolf itself. The ground looks very flat and simple, maybe you could work on that also!

For the rest, this is a very amazing piece! I can see that you're improving alot, keep up the great work! x

- val